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Eleven Minutes CHAPTER 08

Chapter 8 — Maya

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Rae talked about the note she'd left.

It was on the kitchen counter, under the cereal box so Maya couldn't lose it. The heater was out of service. Rae had written the date, the batch, what she'd seen and what she had not tested. Her phone number was at the bottom because someone might arrive while Maya was still at work.

Maya knew all of this. She listened as if it were news.

At eleven twenty-three, Rae said a truck was turning into the street.

A firefighter spoke to her on the sidewalk. She explained the heater, the possible heat damage, the isolation she'd completed. He asked whether anyone else lived in the house.

“No. My mother owns it. She's at the center.”

He didn't ask to speak to Maya. Luis had given the incident information through the proper channel. Maya sat with the phone and heard her daughter being useful without her.

Mrs. Chen returned with a coat and a thermos. Rae thanked her, then said, “She brought tea. I'm not sure if it's for her or me.”

“For both, probably.”

“She says you'd be upset if I got cold.”

“She knows me.”

The house stood across the street. Maya could picture it from exactly where Rae was standing: porch light on, narrow bedroom window to the left, the badly trimmed shrub beside the steps. She had been meaning to cut it back since spring.

It seemed suddenly unbearable that ordinary unfinished tasks could survive her.

The crew found no smoke. They were examining what Rae had described. Nobody declared a future impossible. They had a house and a shut-off heater and a warning to document.

“Dad's arrived,” Rae said.

Maya stiffened. “Stay outside.”

“I am outside. He's on the sidewalk.”

In the background Elias said Rae's name. His voice was faint, unable to come through as clearly as the voice on Maya's desk line. Rae didn't answer him. She said to Maya, “I'm still here.”

At eleven twenty-seven, the emergency queue lit with a call about a fall near the river. Maya looked at Imani.

The supervisor came over. “Are you able to take it?”

“Yes.”

She told Rae she needed to answer a caller. Rae would speak to the crew and call back. Maya ended the private call, put both hands beside her keyboard and took the emergency.

A man was on the sidewalk. He had slipped and hit his head. His friend wanted to pull him up because the rain was getting into his clothes. Maya asked what she needed to know. She told the caller help was coming and stayed with him while he watched his friend.

The caller counted the breaths of the man on the sidewalk. Maya listened and asked him to keep watching.

Maya finished the emergency call and looked at the clock.

Eleven twenty-nine.

She called Rae back. “Rae?”

“I'm here.”

“The time passed.”

“I know.”

“No fire reported?”

“No fire.”

Maya covered her mouth. The relief was so physical she felt it in her knees. She wanted to laugh, to be furious, to call Elias a fool for having frightened them.

But Nora and Daniel had been named in the same kind of warning. Their hands were hurt.

Rae said, “Was he wrong?”

“I don't know.”

“I turned it off before he called.”

“I know.”

“So maybe I made him wrong.”

The predicted time had passed. Maya looked at the incident entry, then away.

“I'm glad,” she said.

“I am too.” Rae sounded angry about it. “I want to be glad without having to ask what it means.”

A firefighter asked Rae where she could stay. She explained that she had her own place. The heater would remain out of service. Maya could collect her belongings, but a further examination would be needed before the heater could be used again.

“I'm going home,” Rae told Maya. “Dad wants me to see something. I told him tomorrow.”

“What something?”

“I don't know. His phone.”

Maya held the edge of her desk.

“I'll come,” she said.

“Come in the morning. Sleep first if you can.”

“You too.”

Rae went quiet a moment. “I didn't call him.”

“When?”

“At eleven twenty-eight. The other times something happened and I called Dad. Tonight I didn't.”

“Because nothing happened.”

“Yes.” Rae waited. “I thought he looked frightened when I said that.”

Maya didn't ask her to explain his face. They had both done too much of that.

“Go home,” she said. “Call me when you want to. You don't have to call when you get there.”

“I might want to tell you.”

“Then tell me.”

Rae hung up. Maya took off her headset. The room felt loud again, people speaking and keyboards clicking and a chair wheel catching in the same seam it caught in every night.

Imani touched her shoulder briefly. “She's outside. You did what you needed to do.”

Maya nodded, but the thought wouldn't settle. A future she'd been told was certain had failed to arrive. Her daughter was going home alive. Somewhere Elias had a phone he wanted them to see.

In the break room, Maya found her cup of cold tea. She drank half of it before she realized she didn't need to.

End of chapter 8